Ever changing blurbs.... hehehehe This truly is fun, but I am ready to be published now, and my other books are more fun to finish than this. Please send prayers that the agents like my stuff too!!!


Julia is a nonhuman. She just doesn’t know it yet.

The second day aboard the cruise ship, Julia is regaled by the horror stories of a country nearby in serious war. A missing heir is the reclusive trio’s plight and they are actively researching a few of the liner’s resident crew members for four years now in hopes of finally restoring peace to their little country. Julia is intrigued in their efforts and offers help, until her cousin becomes the next victim to the mysterious plague befalling the guests. As imminent death approaches, Julia sees red. Literally. The trio is suddenly certain their heir is aboard now. And so is someone else, as Julia just made a few hit lists. Hopefully her suddenly elusive memory catches up with her before it is too late, and surely it would explain why the handsome reclusive royal is suddenly following her with that pinched look on his face.

At least she is not nonhuman anymore. No, now she’s inhuman; and in possession of all the knowledge that comes with being one.

Hopefully Julia Violet-Dawn Fairchild, aka Jewels, will be a name that will be uttered world wide soon!!!!

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And as always happens when I write... I went over board! I have all these different versions for a query as well. I am however keeping a few things the same in each... I just love those lines!!!!


1.)

Julia is a nonhuman. She just doesn’t know it yet.

When a cruise ship’s guests suddenly start falling victim to a mysterious plague, Julia starts wondering about the reclusive royal trio that has been following her around ever since she boarded. Her suspicions get lost when her cousin, her last living relative, falls ill as well. The death toll rises and Julia succumbs to the bereavement that had been threatening her for days only to find she is seeing red and growing warm. Literally. Now the royals are popping up everywhere and suddenly her cousin is healed. Julia is about to get to the bottom of things. One pointed ear at a time.

At least she’s not nonhuman anymore. No now she’s inhuman, and in possession of all the knowledge that comes with being one. Hopefully it will be enough.


2.)

Julia is a nonhuman. She just doesn’t know it yet.

Once she learns this, chaos breaks out aboard the cruise ship she’s on. After memory lapses, mysterious plagues, and odd, almost magical activities, she not only finds her life threatened by beings that she never even knew existed before, but also madly in love with one of them.

At least she’s not nonhuman anymore. No now she’s inhuman, and in possession of all the knowledge that comes with being one.


3.)

Julia is a nonhuman. She just doesn’t know it yet.

Pretending flawlessly that she is actually happy in the frozen north, Julia sends her cousin/guardian off to the cruise ship's spa for the day, leaving Julia on her own to explore the ship's inner bowels. What she uncovers is more than she ever wanted. As the new world declares that Julia is their long foretold savior, she is already thinking of retreating. She falters in the bolt however when she falls in love with one of the forbidden creatures.

No longer a nonhuman, she's an inhuman; and in possession of all the knowledge that comes with being one. Hopefully it will be enough to at least... survive.


Hmmmmmmmm

Now you all know I have more. ;) But these were a few of the edited ones. So which is the best? :D

Vote below in comments ;)

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Okay. Last one was read and liked, but no takers... just little nibblers feasting on the words. Thus, I have written a new query. Let's hope this one is sufficiently delicious to finish the meal with a request! Wish me luck!


Julia is a nonhuman. She just doesn't know it yet.

Pretending flawlessly that she is actually happy in the frozen north, Julia sends her cousin/guardian off to the cruise ship's spa for the day, leaving Julia on her own to explore the ship's inner bowels. What she uncovers is more than she ever wanted. As the new world declares that Julia is their long foretold savior, she is already thinking of retreating. She falters in the bolt however when she falls in love with one of the forbidden creatures.

No longer a nonhuman, she's an inhuman; and in possession of all the knowledge that comes with being one. Hopefully it will be enough to at least... survive.


*Crosses fingers!!!*

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